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Climbing trees

by             Emalaina and Ebony

Your legs move for your body

The bumps on the tree are lumpy

Your heart beats like thunder

Then your hands get red and uglier.

Your mouth opens to breath.

When you get to the top you’re wanting to leave.

Your legs get tired

While your face gets burned fired.

But when you get down

You fall like you’ve earned a crown.

When you’re climbing down and you go one by one

Then you know you are a champion.